Each section has been well thought through and includes a lot of detail and the presentation included every aspect of the opening sequence. Used a good range of multimedia with the pictures and music.
Good range of multimedia elements eg sound etc. Excellent attention to detail. I am concerned that your idea centres around making Joe believable as a hitman. He is 17. How will that be believable? I think if I saw him with a gun in a shop I would not assume hitman I would assume that he was robbing the shop. Hitmen are normally aged 30 and over because they have life experience, strength, contacts in the criminal world, are trusted by criminals etc.. I am not sure what criminal would hire a 17 year old as a hit man, or how he would have gotten into this type of career at such a young age. I would have a think about this as casting young people in roles like this can often end up being the thing that ruins a student opening as it is hard to look past that and appreciate the quality in the rest of the work.
Your prezi is extremely detailed and you seem to have a clear understanding of what you are going to include in your opening sequence. Overall a very well thought out prezi.
Good variety of multimedia elements with lots of detail explaining every aspect of the opening sequence. A good range of images have been used to explain the ideas in an effective manner. Perhaps the use of make up tests should be used to make Joe look older and more believable as the hitman within the sequence.
Each section has been well thought through and includes a lot of detail and the presentation included every aspect of the opening sequence. Used a good range of multimedia with the pictures and music.
ReplyDeleteGood range of multimedia elements eg sound etc. Excellent attention to detail. I am concerned that your idea centres around making Joe believable as a hitman. He is 17. How will that be believable? I think if I saw him with a gun in a shop I would not assume hitman I would assume that he was robbing the shop. Hitmen are normally aged 30 and over because they have life experience, strength, contacts in the criminal world, are trusted by criminals etc.. I am not sure what criminal would hire a 17 year old as a hit man, or how he would have gotten into this type of career at such a young age. I would have a think about this as casting young people in roles like this can often end up being the thing that ruins a student opening as it is hard to look past that and appreciate the quality in the rest of the work.
ReplyDeleteYour prezi is extremely detailed and you seem to have a clear understanding of what you are going to include in your opening sequence. Overall a very well thought out prezi.
ReplyDeleteGood variety of multimedia elements with lots of detail explaining every aspect of the opening sequence. A good range of images have been used to explain the ideas in an effective manner. Perhaps the use of make up tests should be used to make Joe look older and more believable as the hitman within the sequence.
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